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SongKunrou
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Posted on Mon, Nov 02, 2009 08:37

This was written in about 5 minutes or so a few days ago, so I know it's not very good, but here goes anyway. I wish for a woman with radiant hair And skin so soft and fair. I wish for a woman with luminous eyes And a desire to watch the skies. I wish for a woman to hold close by To touch and kiss and sigh. How I miss a woman?s touch This, I miss so much. A warm embrace under the sun When the day is said and done. Those soft curves and tender strokes While the incense before us smokes. A languid sigh, a naked stretch, Caught forever in a sketch? But alas, she is not here The woman I wish to hold dear


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Posted on Tue, Jan 19, 2010 21:29

it's a very6 good poem and I to felt pulled into the emotion of it. I used to write poetry quite a bit {when inspired by the love of a woman}, being single has seemed to strip me of my creativity in that area.... but keep trying to write and never lose the gift of prose given by the goddesses.... I too, long for the feel of a woman in my arms again.....


Do as ye will, lest it harm none....

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Posted on Tue, Jan 19, 2010 16:58

Wow what a nice poem that says just how I am feeling right now


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ChrisWui
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Posted on Tue, Dec 22, 2009 08:45

Very good poem. Nice..


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Posted on Fri, Nov 20, 2009 17:26

That is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it.


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Posted on Wed, Nov 18, 2009 09:08

I used to write poetry all the time, but i seem to have fallen out of it, (and how I wish I could get back in.) This poem, however, is beautiful in it's simplicity. The imagery is very moving, and made me feel the emotions that you yourself are experiencing. You have a talent. Keep writing <3 =)


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MaureenBrill
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Posted on Thu, Nov 12, 2009 16:19

Nice poem.


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Posted on Tue, Nov 10, 2009 23:22

i agree i have been wanting a girlfriend for a long time


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Posted on Thu, Nov 05, 2009 13:50

awsum peom :)


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Posted on Wed, Nov 04, 2009 11:12

You underestimate your poem! Very, very good!


Waiting to...well, it's up to you to fill in the blanks!

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